Good day people, and welcome again to Fallacious Each Time. Immediately I’m delighted to be returning to the Legend of Vox Machina, touching down in a second of disaster and calamity for our poor adventurers. Having simply secured a platemail vestige for Pike and overwhelmed a dragon within the cut price, they returned to Whitestone to see it bathed in fireplace, the sky alive with Thordak’s nightmare brood. This assault marked the top of their alliance with the devious Raishan, and the start of a brand new quest: killing that asshole Anna Ripley.
So principally, it looks like we’ve surmounted the third act finale of Mercer’s total marketing campaign construction, in line with the villain-slaying commonplace of the Whitestone and Thunder Herd act finales. DnD is an everlasting compromise between participant company and narrative necessity; tales aren’t structured arbitrarily, their rise and falls of drama are paced in order to domesticate reader curiosity, provide moments of launch, and finally reward the reader for his or her funding. As such, whereas DnD campaigns are sometimes extra freewheeling than your common fantasy novel, a skillful DM will nonetheless infuse them with the structural momentum of a standard narrative, drawing rising motion collectively into cathartic peaks, after which humbling the celebration earlier than beginning that rise over once more.
By the way, my celebration’s personal ongoing marketing campaign has simply reached an analogous level, having lately defeated the vampire Strahd with some form of holy hand grenade. We’re really in a a lot trickier spot, because the self-contained nature of the Curse of Strahd marketing campaign means we’re now left with no dangling threads to pursue, and primarily must reinvent a purpose why we’re even touring collectively. I’m doing my greatest to make some player-side sense of our ramblings, however must admit I’m changing into more and more nostalgic for my days of DM-side marketing campaign management, because the richness of a participant character is largely a mirrored image of how meaningfully they will work together with the DM’s world. Let’s take pleasure in Mercer and Percy exhibiting precisely how that’s carried out as we return to Vox Machina!
Episode 7

We open on a recent set of gorgeous backgrounds, this time detailing an alpine village that appears divided between the farming of watery paddies and the mining of valuable minerals. Apparently that is really Ripley’s hometown, as we see a a lot youthful Ripley fixing a minecart
These flashbacks are an incredible privilege of this adaptation; even in case you had the DM merely convey this complete scene by way of exposition, it will possess little of the impression of actually seeing a younger Ripley going about her enterprise. I really really feel prefer it’s a superb factor in DnD phrases that I don’t be taught notably effectively by way of spoken phrases versus by pictures or textual content – due to that, I additionally by no means assume my gamers will care a few scene or character just because I’ve described them. Funding in DnD should essentially be solid by motion, by drama within the current tense, by issues the gamers can personally work together with

A bunch of mages often known as The Meeting arrive to steal their mines. Thus Ripley’s motivation is firmly established: she should construct weapons able to contending with magic-users, so she’s going to by no means really feel this helpless once more
Leaping again to the current, Percy has realized why Ripley revealed Whitestone’s location: to steal their provide of Residuum. I respect how Mercer is continuous to weave the implications of Percy’s preliminary arc all through this Chroma Conclave arc, sustaining a way of continuity and consequence whereas additionally allaying the feeling of conflicts being completely seasonal. I think about that mysterious orb from the top of season one will finally come again into play in some calamitous trend as effectively
Percy states the rocks left of their vault can solely be discovered on the isle of Glintshore. An appropriately conclusive response to what was presumably a superb investigation verify

Performing investigations in DnD is hard exactly as a result of “Investigation” is an precise talent within the talent checklist; if you’d like investigation to include extra interplay than simply rolling that particular talent verify, you need to flex a bit, both incorporating a necessity for a number of talent checks or progressive investigations (so, “you assume you would possibly recall this stone from a e book” being the primary success, then you definately even have to seek out that e book, etcetera)
Vex correctly notes that Ripley leaving this stone is actually an invite
“You stated I’m a modified man. Let’s hope you’re proper.” Among the best methods to convey participant characters reaching a bonding threshold: trusting one another’s judgment over their very own

Glorious beat of Percy and Vex fretting over revealing their relationship to the crew, adopted by the crew lamenting how apparent these two are being. There’s loads of enjoyable, fertile drama in navigating romantic relationships between characters, and this section is one among my favorites to really write – the awkward adjustment interval, whenever you’re each giddy about being a pair, however not really certain easy methods to act as a pair. I had an inordinate quantity of enjoyable writing that dynamic for my first novel, and have since indulged in it whereas writing non-player characters as typically as doable
After all, I additionally love the “makes an attempt at larger sincerity/intimacy solely invoke friction” previous section, exemplified by one thing like Toradora’s drama. At present having loads of enjoyable writing by that section with two of my different non-player characters

The crew elect to fly to Glintshore, demonstrating the odd caravan of transport colleges that usually outline later-level events. Between Vex’s broom, Vax’s wings, and Keyleth’s big eagle kind, they’ve obtained simply sufficient flight capabilities to handle it
We watch ants carry leaves alongside a vine earlier than the main focus shifts behind them, monitoring our heroes by the forest. I’ve really been attempting to enhance my use of the DnD equal of “establishing pictures” – the temporary expository textual content that introduces a brand new scene or area. Pure descriptive copy tends to scrub over me in speech, so I attempt to be temporary but evocative, drawing in as many senses as doable – what’s the sound, scent, and texture of this place? It’s onerous to craft ambiance in DnD, but it surely’s effectively well worth the attempting

The subsequent hour or so of Vax rigorously poking at traps is mercifully summarized. Even when an space appears prone to have traps, making the gamers entice verify the whole lot usually simply slows the sport down, so I are likely to restrict my traps to nevertheless many obtain max comedy. A chest filled with spring-loaded scorpions must be used sparingly
Percival admits he’s in love with Vex, and in traditional Vex trend, she freezes after which exits the scene. Vex’s insecurities are a superb complement to the general celebration drama, scary friction with Vax, Percy, and even Keyleth. For my celebration’s personal present marketing campaign, we’ve made a degree of plotting out key areas of philosophical disagreement between our characters, akin to to extra gracefully promote drama and character progress. Participant characters that agree on the whole lot don’t are likely to really feel notably distinct or memorable

Distracted by Percy’s confession, Vex journeys proper over a wire, and an entrancing smoke overwhelms the celebration
“Your love, it kills.” A quick flashback to Vex’s useless mom affords some context for her anxieties. You possibly can theoretically create a participant character with out a significant backstory, however that naturally undercuts the sense that your character is on some type of emotional journey, following an arc from the place they started in the direction of who they’ll change into. We’re constructed of our previous experiences, and denying such experiences makes your character a cipher
Ripley introduces Percy to the manufacturing unit whereas the remainder of the celebration are paralyzed by “delirium gasoline.” A advantageous sufficient gadget for difficult their private growth, equally to how the sphinx challenged them again in season two. For gamers who’re really invested of their characters’ emotional growth, psychological gauntlets like this generally is a likelihood to indicate off, to flex how far their avatars have come

And naturally, Percy being tempted to the darkish aspect by Ripley is simply one other variation on that very same idea
“My imperfections don’t make me weaker. They make me who I’m.” Properly stated, Percy. From what I’ve seen of their precise periods, the Important Function crew are preposterously adept at arising with a killer line or speech when the chance requires it; I do what I can to plot out what I’m ready, however some skills you’ll be able to solely admire, not successfully imitate
“I can’t be complicit.” “Progress can’t be stopped.” Percy and Ripley’s battle is essentially the most compelling inside this story, as Ripley’s the one antagonist with an precise level – scientific progress will proceed, and in a world dominated by magic, trying to battle again by science has a pleasant egalitarian ring to it. It’s the least gamified battle in a marketing campaign in any other case outlined by searching for dragon balls to battle unquestionably evil dragons

“A library? Phrases, all phrases? Why are there no photos!?” Bless Grog. Conserving a personality or two easy does assist the dramatic steadiness
Ooh, some good smear-heavy cuts for Percy and Ripley’s duel
The second of reality in fact comes after his victory, when he should determine whether or not he’s nonetheless the vengeful executioner, or if he can let this go
However although Percy has modified, Ripley has not. She greets his mercy with a gunshot

And Carried out
Properly, that’s what you get for attempting to redeem people, I suppose. Nonetheless, even her refusal to simply accept Percy’s provide right here additional bolsters Anna Ripley’s place as essentially the most compelling non-player character on this marketing campaign, a personality with completely comprehensible motivation who has been drawn right into a violent, antagonistic function by her unflinching religion in her convictions. Seeing her cross each phrases and weapons with Percy has me feeling wanting to craft such equally compelling antagonists for my very own marketing campaign; I’ve doubtless been too beneficiant when it comes to character redemption previously, and will most likely stand so as to add a personality or two the celebration can’t fairly rehabilitate. It’s a superb Vox Machina episode that leaves me so wanting to steal one thing!
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